I am always looking a good scenery and nice people when I visit my hometown. My hometown is not too far from Padang , the capital city of West Sumatera . My hometown is Pariaman. It takes about one hour to go there. In Pariaman, my hometown is located in Lubuak Idai. I am sure that everyone ever hear Lubuak Idai.
Actually, Lubuak Idai is name of a river wich across the village. The river has a deep pound and slow current in the reachers.when I was a child, I used to swim in the river. Now, the name I using by a restaurant inPadang which famous with a delicious roasted fish. The restaurant is located in Khatib Sulaiman street , in Padang .
Actually, Lubuak Idai is name of a river wich across the village. The river has a deep pound and slow current in the reachers.when I was a child, I used to swim in the river. Now, the name I using by a restaurant in
source picture: yusranita.wordpress.com and sekretariat@disbudpar-kotapariaman.org
Then, about five kilometers from Cermin beach. There is located a famous beach in Pariaman. The beach called Ulakan beach. Ulakan beach is the famous beach in Pariaman. People usually come there for a religion funeral. There is a grave of Syekh Burhanuddin take place. Everyone in there believe that people who visit it in seven times it has same meaning with pray in Mecca .
Pariaman beach has a beautiful place to take a vacation. Most people in Pariaman always go there every weekend. I think, you should go there to take a vacation…


it better to you to put interesting picture like the beach in Pariaman,,,
BalasHapusso far, your essay is good enough because you can make an interesting sentence to make people interested,,
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that's all from me,,
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thanks..
BalasHapusthis is my old posting..
my newposting can't open..
hikss...
i think tour essay is good.
BalasHapusbut,
dont began a pragraph with conjunction word,
like this.
"Then, about five kilometers from Cermin beach"
just it..
ok.
keep writing to be better...^_^
why you just made it to be three paragraph?
BalasHapusyou can make more paragraph.
after "dot" dont use conjunction.
do the best for your writing ^^
perhatian ,,...!
BalasHapusmohon utk tidak komen d sini please komen yg terbaru...
yang iko alah sangat lamooo...
thank you. :D
check...check
BalasHapus^_^
"I am sure that everyone ever hear Lubuak Idai"
(in first paragraph, last sentence)
I do not think so
maybe, minangkabau people ever hear lubuk idai but what about people outside the western sumatra..??
I am not sure...
hhehehe