Aulia Fitri
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Comparisaon and contrast essay
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Continuing study is a necessity for us. Sometimes it is difficult for us when we choose a university to continue our study. We could be confuse about which one the university that we like the most. The same thing is also happen when we choose about study abroad or domestic. Each of them has some advantages so we need to think it over before decided our choice. In this essay, I will elaborate about the advantages going study abroad or domestic.
First, let us talk about the advantages of going study abroad. If you continue your study in a progressing country, the benefit will look clearly in academic system. A developing country has lower academic system than a progressing country. in foreign countries usually a lot of scientific seminars are held, studies and discussions are free with many facilities. So, you will have much knowledge there. Then, when you visit one country for vacation or study, it can increase your experience. You can get several experiences about the culture or about the situation of that country. If you a friendly person, you may have a lot of friends during your study there. In terms of language ability, so overseas we have very big opportunity to sharpening our foreign language. For example, in the West with English or French and in the Middle East by Arabic. It is good for you that study in English Department.
Second, there are some different advantages if you continue study in domestic. The truly one advantages is not spend much money. Studying in domestic means you have inexpensive life than abroad. If you study abroad, the prices are probably higher than domestic. Then, the most important point is you are live close with your family. When parents sad, sick, or hit by the problems we can help them directly. Whenever you get homesick, it is easy for you to get home soon. So, it is easily for them to take care of you, too. Study in domestic also
Here are just a few of the most advantages about study abroad and domestic. Study abroad gives you more benefit in academic system. However, you do not need worry about financial if you study in domestic. It is depend on you where the university you going to choose. Both of them have several advantages that give you different benefits.


i think this essay too long and make a reader can be confused.........
BalasHapusand check the grammar please......
check it again.........
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BalasHapusI think your essay is good and I have corrected it,.
BalasHapusBut, I still find a little bit mistake,,
Look at the last paragraph line 4.
"t is depend on you where the university you going to choose"
I think it's good to you to change it with
"It depends on you where the university you going to choose"
Because "it" is singular..
I think that's it,..
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BalasHapusyour essay is interesting,..
but i find a little mistake,..
in paragraph 2 L 7 "when you visit one country for vacation or study" i think is different idea,.. you should delete "vacation" because you tell about study,..
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haii aulia..
BalasHapusthanks for your comment..
i agree with cika..
vacation and study is different idea..
that's all from me..
keep writing and see you..
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BalasHapusi think your essay is good enough...
BalasHapusi suggest tio you, please be concern about grammar and spelling word....
try it, and see what will happend....
Hi,Aulia..
BalasHapusYour essay is good...
But keep pay attention with your grammar.
Just revise it to make it better.
That's all from me.
Thank you.
Keep writing. :)