Aulia Fitri
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Activity 4
My Idol
Process 4
F1 GP is a famous race car in the world. Many racer join to racing there, whether old or young. All racers have a good performance and a good trick to be a winner. There is one of racer that really interesting for me. His name is Kimi Raikonen.i like him since his first performance in F1 GP.
Kimi Raikonen is a professional racer who comes from Finlandia. He was born on October 17th, 1979 in Finlandia. He looks good with his pretty tall and average weigh. He has brown eyes and blond hair. He is really good looking as a racer car.
Kimi raised from a simple family. He is the youngest son in his family. His mother name is Paula and his father name is Matty Raikonen. He has one brother who have name Rami Raikonen. Now Rami join as a racer in F3 Finlandia. Kimi’s father works as a mechanic so that Kimi has a skill as a racer. Now his father joins regional Finlandia.
If we talk about Kimis hobby, it is will interest to telling because Kimi has several hobbies. When he was in Junior High School, he interested in many sports. At school, Kimi used to play football, taekwondo, basketball, and cricket. He always won in many sport activities at school. Then, he like listening Eminem and U2 band songs. He has a unique behavior that is sleep before the race is start. The most his favorite foods and drink is noodle and juice.
In several years ago, Kimi was known as F1 racer. He started his career in 2002 as F1 racer with Sauber Team. In 2007, he got an award as world’s champion. He rarely interaction with his team because unable speak English fluently. Therefore, Kimi is known well as Iceman.
Now Kimi join as a Rally racer in Finlandia with his own team. He left his career as F1 racer because he made a bad performance in two years latest and he got supporting from his wife to be a rally racer.
In my conclusion, Kimi is really a good racer. He has much experience as a racer. As a result, he can paly many sports when he was in high School. Then, he has favorite music which different with his character. So far, he still famous with his nickname Iceman.

"to telling"(paragraph 4 line 2)
BalasHapusI think the correct one is "for telling" or "to tell"
and pay attention to your capital letter especially to say "I"
your essay is good enough for me..
keep writing..
F1 GP is a famous race car in the world. Many racer join to racing there,
BalasHapuschange it with..
F1 GP is the most famous race car in the world. Many racers join to racing there,
Hi,Aulia..
BalasHapusYour essay is good enough..
I agree with Sabil.I found a mistake about using a capital letter in your essay.
That's all from me.
Keep writing.
By the way thank's for your comment on my blog.
:)
Thanks guys..
BalasHapusHmm..I think you are right..
i will fix it..